Mark R Slaughter


But Don't Despair


Despair, if you must –
But how's it going to pull you through?
Despair, when you trust
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  • Alison Cassidy (4/18/2009 8:59:00 PM)

    Your advice is exemplary. Your poem is well structured with a real feel for rhyme and rhythm. Your conclusion is spot on. Definitely worth a second read. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (Report) Reply

  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir (4/16/2009 2:34:00 AM)

    So give to others - give them all a helping lift:
    Despair, you'll find will disappear -
    And that has got to be a well-deserved
    And saintly gift!

    You have conveyed a very bright message in this well worded poem. A saintly gift indeed..........10. (Report) Reply

  • Marie Shine (4/15/2009 4:15:00 PM)

    I like this poem VERY much Mark.It is full of hope and most uplifting.Giving us free lessons in how to lose our despair, if we choose to heed them. It is very well written and from the heart.A well deserved 10+++++++++++++ (Report) Reply

  • Lynda Robson (4/15/2009 4:04:00 PM)

    Nice uplifting poem Mark, others problems can make our own look small,
    10
    Lynda xx (Report) Reply

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