Butterflies Poem by Mubeen Sadhika

Butterflies

Rating: 5.0


Butterfly 1

Brown and Orange in colour. Big sized.
Flapping and fluttering.
Expressing the palpitation.
Came to distract the distress.

Butterfly 2

Light green in colour. Medium sized.
Silent. Sat on the roof.
Reflecting the unrecognised.
Flew in representing the disappointment.

Butterfly 3

Black and White in colour. Not so big.
Light quiver and tremble.
Foretelling the shock.
Appeared to tell the deep sorrow.

Butterfly 4

Ash Grey in colour. Small in size.
Agitating for a long time around the light.
Anticipating the fear.
Arrived to figure out the danger.

Butterfly 5

Red and White in colour. Not so small.
Quiet. Rested on the floor.
Apprehending the amusement.
Popped into discovering the eternal.

Thursday, September 22, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: animal
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I really wonder to see the butterflies with many colours, Moreover in same time.because I could not see such colourful In my soroundings, but your poem made me as I have seen live.nice.10points

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Mubeen Sadhika 19 October 2016

Thank you so much for your valuable comments Vaidyanathan Ram Iyer Sir.

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Anil Kumar Panda 05 October 2016

This is nice when one looks at the butterflies flapping their wings with varied colors. Keep inking.

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Mubeen Sadhika 19 October 2016

Sorry Anil Kumar Panda Sir for the late reply. Thank you so much for your nice comments.

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Mubeen Sadhika 19 October 2016

Sorry Anil Kumar Panda Sir for the late reply. Thank you so much for your nice comment.s.

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Paul Reed 22 September 2016

Mubeen, this is an unusual and very well delivered format for your poem, enjoyed it very much.

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Mubeen Sadhika 22 September 2016

Thanks so much Paul Reed

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Mubeen Sadhika 22 September 2016

Thanks so much Paul Reed.

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