(20th May 1942 / Caterham)

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BUTTERFLY MEADOWS

When love ends

Memories remain afire
And each one
Builds upon my loneliness.

No more will I ramble free
Sensuous and wanton
Over butterfly meadows of your heart.

Submitted: Saturday, February 16, 2008
Edited: Friday, July 04, 2008


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  • Sidra Sajid (12/12/2008 3:52:00 PM)

    Beautiful...I envy the throb of subdued passion in this simple poem. A delightful read indeed!

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  • A Poet Who Loves To Sing Alves (12/1/2008 10:07:00 AM)

    Colin,

    I love the sentiment expressed in this lovely poem...10 from me.


    A Poet Who Loves....

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  • Yabadabadoo (11/25/2008 5:38:00 PM)

    wow, very nice poem
    that is just what happens when love ends

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  • David Joergensen (11/24/2008 12:00:00 PM)

    So true.
    Really enjoyed it.

    -David Joergensen

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  • Linda Moore (11/17/2008 7:47:00 PM)

    There is such a Sweetness to this poem, it is beautiful, but somehow feels sad........10

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  • Edgardo Tugade (11/16/2008 5:52:00 AM)

    This is a softly intense poem. Quite a delight.

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  • Hershe Moore (11/12/2008 11:03:00 PM)

    the title lured me in and the words were released brilliantly. i enjoyed this piece. thanks for sharing with me

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  • Kevin Eaglesfield (11/6/2008 8:22:00 AM)

    Nicely and sweetly described.Really liked this.Thanks.Kev

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  • Laoise NiChonchearca (11/3/2008 9:56:00 AM)

    You have a lovely way of expression, i really liked this poem

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  • Drew Bailey Golden (10/29/2008 4:06:00 PM)

    I enjoyed this, it was pretty. drew

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