By All Persons Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

By All Persons

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Give me o lord another chance
To be on her lap forever or at once
Holier than holy and sacred than heaven
My heart is filled and fully driven

I wish it to happen
Childhood to remain
To play near her without pain
Just innocent game without any aim

No stage is that adorable
Even it was for almighty also preferable
They have preferred to be on earth
And fulfilled mission with the arrival of death

I too would wish
Till my life is finished
To walk with mother’s finger
Watch around linger

It may be the only place
Where innocence is the only case
It stays as prime object
Everybody loves the child act

Home or around
People have found
The child as lovable
So smart and capable

It is all in one
For one person
With no reasons
Still loved by all persons

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 September 2013

Give me o lord another chance To be on her lap forever or at once

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 September 2013

Everybody loves the child act Alvin Cole12 minutes ago Keen observations, I enjoy your poetic voice. Comment +1 nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 September 2013

Dev Parkash Nischal11 minutes ago well written. Comment +1 Does not flow.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 September 2013

June8 minutes ago This poem does not flow to give a clear meaning.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2013

Preeti Sabhar.. Home or around People have found The child as lovable So smart and capable

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2013

???? ???? NE.. Give me o lord another chance To be on her lap forever or at once Holier than holy and sacred than heaven My heart is filled and fully driven

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2013

Seema Kamble likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2013

**RITA** PATEL Excellent

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2013

raj malik very nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2013

My Faith hmmmmm....nice Sir, tks yeaaaaaaaaaa

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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