By Your Side Poem by Sam S.Slait

By Your Side

Rating: 4.8


Here I am,
By your side,
Holding on,
For the ride.

It was such a high,
A drug to fly.

Yet now I dive,
A loss of life,
Ready to die.

You were a knife in the back,
You were a pain I felt.

Nothing but a witch,
Nothing but a pain in my heart.

You were nothing but a migrain,
All you were good for was a heart ache.

All you are is a two bit witch,
Get out,
Never come back,
I never want to see,
That face again.

Your worthless to me,
The pain you gave,
Was to unbearable.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amber S 06 September 2011

good poem. keep up the work :) -Amber

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Natasha Kirke 06 February 2011

This is a very emotional poem. I like the rhyme scheme, it's quite effective!

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so beautiful and touching i feel like dis now love it

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Stormy Day 13 December 2010

The thought structure jumps around a lot, giving a feel of disjointed emotion/inability to fully express depth of said emotions. I don't know if this was the intended purpose, but it works well for this poem.

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Mark Jordan 09 December 2010

Interesting Beatnik style! I assume you mean 'Was too unbearable' in the last line?

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