'Can I' Poem by Srushti Dodamani

'Can I'

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All your darkest secrets, all your deepest scars,
Can i have them?
All your strongest lies, all your weakest truths,
Can i know them?
All your biggest fears, all yours smallest tears,
Can i feel them?


Do not say me a no, please don't say a no.


What if, I am your last chance.
What if, I am your last hope.
What if, I am your last love.
What if, I am your last breath.


I want to set you free from your dreams.
I want to fill your void with any memories.

I want to find the broken pieces of your soul.
I want to make you once again whole.

Sunday, July 12, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Dedicated to my love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 31 July 2020

All your strongest lies, all your weakest truths, Can i know them? All your biggest fears, all yours smallest tears, Can i feel them? Can i have all these can i smell all can i hug all that is in your life. very fine, nobility in simplicity. tony

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Chinedu Dike 12 July 2020

Powerfully and movingly penned is this beautiful love poem of yours. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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