Can It Be? Poem by Earam Dio

Can It Be?



Can the tears extinguish the flames of my heart?
Can the screams explode the volcano of my anger?
Can you feel what I exactly feel inside?
Can you make me calm down?

I think no one can do anything for me now

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Almedia Knight-Oliver 20 December 2009

Hi Earam, I love your poem...the narrator must understand that only the character in the poem can do something. A goosd write, and I give this poem a 10

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The Lost.. 17 December 2009

but if someone does love you..he\she will do every thing for you..and will also answer your questions :) hope you'll find that one...keep writing and let poetry answer your questions :)

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