Can'T You Just Love Me? Poem by XxAmieLee xX

Can'T You Just Love Me?

Rating: 5.0


The first time I saw you,
I knew you were gold,
but you couldn't love me,
you had to make my heart feel cold.

You're gorgeous, you're sexy,
you're too good for me,
but everytime I look at you, I think,
can't you just love me?

You'll never love me,
I'm just another person to you,
even though I love you to bits,
you can't love me too.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 22 November 2007

Amie, you show here is one of life's sad ironies - you can't make anyone love you. You can love them to bits, but the love is always yours. Another little irony though is that when the object of your affection shows an interest in you, often your passion for them wanes. I think the expression is 'the grass is greener'. One day, you'll find reciprocal love - that's when all the bells ring. An honest, passionate piece straight from life. love, Allie xxxx

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Professor Murder 23 November 2007

Very deep, u even moved this forsaken heart. ~MaXxwell

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 27 April 2009

this is a heartfelt masterpiece! lovely poem indeed

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Ken E Hall 14 April 2009

Luvli poem Amie on a unlucky in love subject....... if you see that girl you tell her when thee boy comes along for her he will sit when she says sit and will even fetch a ball if she throws it..... Boys are like lost dogs for awhile when they find thee girl! regards uavanice1

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Existential Despair 06 September 2008

Wow.....a poem too perfect...if the heart could speak these are the words it would use...10/10

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Meg Kennedy 22 August 2008

* I REALLY FEEL THIS ONE! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! * soooooooooo intuitive! ! ! ! - MEGZ :)

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*Emminem* + Emma + ENGLISH 12 February 2008

A really good poem, that I have just read has made it turn into a beautiful piece of art straight from your heart! ! ! ! ! I really love this poem from Emma ;)

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