Can There Be A Title? Poem by indira babbellapati

Can There Be A Title?

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we laugh
we weep
strangers to ourselves

in the puddle
wearing a garland of hope
a crown of thorns

a moment of agony
unfathomable
the depth of destiny

refuge in one another's agony!
a saga of suffering
a smile thrown here and there

ah, in installments
drain traces of life!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Miriam Maia Padua 02 November 2011

Very true... very provoking title... made me click and know what's behind the title especially it's is created by you, Mam. I know there's something fruitful and great concept in it... and indeed...you write with a bang...knocking our mind and heart... a write we can relate.... made me ponder and ask myself too..Can there be a title? very nice...

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Mark Nwagwu 02 November 2011

Indeed, Indira, can there be a title to this life, where the experiences are phenomenal, but there's love, even in the puddle. This is a warm heartening poem

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indira babbellapati

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visakhapatnam, india
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