~ Can You Guide Me? ~ [22 Words Poetry] Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

Wow...Great one in short...funny..and enjoying Regards ~ niv

Ha ha ha...Knows who...if one knows...how one will guide...good pun 10

Wow! ! Great one...cute on lighter side/ in shade tenner thanks sharing

Nice short poem, Nivedita! I like it more soever for it compactness of thought, even in such short verses. Thank you for sharing ~Besa

The laziness of modern life and how easy it is get confused are things that come to mind when reading this shor piece so well executed. Well done.

======================================== ** ORIGINAL MESSAGE ******************** ======================================== From: Kee Thampi To: Nivedita [poet Under Threat Of Editorial Cann Date-Time: 9/29/2012 11: 40: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: hi ---------- dearest poetess never write like this Not on My Own Cremation! ! be with good mind kee == Posted thro’ kindness of AB London

Great canvas Novel thought Deep impact on 'going-to-die' persons specially in west Congrat for foresight in poetic format...10++

Out of desperation in materialistic Western Life Style and Mind Set this poem got momentum And it'll surely swell like snowball in psyche of Empty-Nest-Syndrome in West India has not reached to that scale yet...may be gasping to reach there as blindly we're becoming 'Copy-Cat' of West Good Poem a bonk [hit hard] to consumerist society Thanks sharing...10+

It is not light reading poem Mr. Bagchi rightly pointed out concern about funeral in west... Serious poem indeed please ponder readers what poet written in 'white-Ink'

Indeed so it is needed As in West funeral and coffin charges and costs too high And going-die persons are anxious about it Good contemplative poem Others may look in diluted form... But I see in this canvas...good poem for the elderly..must be ten plus plus