(6/11/54 / Darwen England)

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Canada (haiku)

Big beautiful land,
maple surup and pancakes,
Beaver, Moose and Deer

Submitted: Wednesday, November 01, 2006
Edited: Monday, November 01, 2010


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  • Vega Star (1/31/2007 5:38:00 PM)

    Very great, especially since I'll be moving to Canada. You forgot to talk about the \ people and hockey.

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  • Francesca Johnson (11/7/2006 2:14:00 AM)

    You can keep the maple syrup and pancakes, Dave, but bring me back a moose, OK?

    Love, Fran the fan xx

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  • Diane Violet (11/1/2006 8:10:00 AM)

    Like your haiku Dave, maple syrup, mmm......and it has to be the real stuff. Deer is almost a dirty word in this locale, they're beautiful to watch but planting a garden is basically just food for the deer. A fun experiment to find the plants the deer won't eat.......................All the best, Diane

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  • Asma Bahrainwala (11/1/2006 6:27:00 AM)

    interesting haiku...

    a few words say it all...

    Asma...

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