...~~candles~~... Poem by wardha jawdat

...~~candles~~...

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i dreamt of candles
shimmering, dainty, romantic
....candles
all aglow lighting my path
melting away longingly
velvet ivory wax
licking the soft soles of my feet
...u came home to me
with diamonds and roses.

i dreamt of candles
ablaze, threating, ominous
....candles
all licking hungrily at my clothes
wanting to consume me
make me one with them
a charred cinder
.....u told me of her
with acerbic finality

i dreamt of candles
silent, suffering, perservering
....candles
all burning no longer a pretty yellow
just icy blue
plotting with precision
to set the stage on fire
....u called me repentent
i answered with laughter.


....'what goes around comes around'...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Reshma Ramesh 01 October 2008

great write............

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all aglow lighting my path melting away longingly velvet ivory wax this line gets assimilated in tongue if you read it aloud. Acerbity needs the bedrock of all the cloying sweetness of yesterdays to bloom with an inimitable grandeur all licking hungrily at my clothes wanting to consume me make me one with them a charred cinder very excruciatingly expression

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Sadiqullah Khan 18 September 2008

A warm piece ending with some thing that is 'icy cold'...the motif of candle is brilliantly used here, ,10

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