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Maria Barbara Korynt
(8/11/2009 8:39:00 PM) |
Contents and a form are enrapturing me. These are fine writing and expressing in few words, so a lot 'feeling'. It is necessary to be an unusually sensitive man in order to feel the ones form, into the so subtle, and at the same time precise way.
Admittedly and am and supporter 5.7,5 - however and reading, that old champions haiku '., used the similar form.Admittedly and am and supporter
5.7,5 - however and read, that old champions haiku '., used the similar form. There is an adopted principle which I favour: keeping the time (teraż niejszy) record of the moment (moment) , the motive for the nature, the Lack of Rhymes and one verse.. and structure being in effect. TANKA and other forms, it is ader matter. Beautiful poems, having the deep pronunciation are rising from the haiku.
To sum up, fine writing, it is worthwhile reading the Author. Cause - is there what enrapture.(10v.) Greetings. - Maria Barbara Korynt
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Aijaz Asif
(6/4/2009 3:19:00 AM) |
Singing rain dancing
Mosquito’s birthday ceremony
Raining pleasure breeding.... lol nice one Sarkar and i can imagine how it seems when time of sunsets come....they surely are candy verses and you are the master is changing the theme in words....thanks for sharing bro and sorry for the late rep....10+++++++++
rgds
asif
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surya surya
(6/3/2009 11:38:00 PM) |
hey wonderfully worded and different in look and style. posted 10
love
surya
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Karin Anderson
(6/3/2009 8:32:00 PM) |
Great and unusual images here Ashraful making it stand out from other work! Excellent!
Karin Anderson
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Brishti Mazumdar
(6/3/2009 9:22:00 AM) |
I liked your Candy verse...So simple but so interesting..Luv - Brishti Mazumdar
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Smiley Hooker
(6/3/2009 1:47:00 AM) |
wow, mosquito's celebrating birthday! i don't wanna be there but you've made it quite interesting! a cleaver and imaginative write as always.10: -)
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Amit Ray
(6/2/2009 6:30:00 PM) |
superb flow and magnificent techniques employed here.Khhita khobor bhaijaan/khhita mato reba? Vala asen nani? ....................10++
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Indira Renganathan
(6/1/2009 5:26:00 AM) |
Superb althrough...words really turned into meaningful poetry...especially 'Mosquito’s birthday ceremony'...very pleasant like rains
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Raj Arumugam
(6/1/2009 4:48:00 AM) |
The quartet has excellent turns of poetic phrase that are essential into coming into bringing forth poetry rather than mere verse:
Mosquito’s birthday ceremony/ Rainy needles towards destination/ Cyber rain/
Chatting baby
Just love the poem!
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