Captivation Poem by Amitava Sur
Captivation
So fortunate and blessed I am
To be associated with you
So fulfilled and content I am
To be loved and endeared by you!
I felt the Heaven on earth
By holding and clasping you
I enjoyed the thrill of walking in ‘EDEN’
While we two walked under the moon’s silvery beam
In that sandy and solitary bay.
Never I can erase your
Alluring tenderness within you
Being clubbed and combined
With the aura of your stunning persona.
Those wide eyes with the depth of a lake
That captivating smile with a dimple on your cheek-
So magnetic and so infiltrating they were,
Who totally fantasized and captured my whole being!
Your warmth and mystic smile
Shook me with a feeling of a quake,
I was drowned in a whirl wind
And finally being lost inside you.
Endearing and caressing you
I love to be stuck to you.
In no way I can keep myself
Away from your being
I’ll be waiting in dreaming you
And beseech you to hold me tight
With your love and astounding grace
I dream to be entwined with you
Unendingly over time…..
You made my sweat, forced me to tremble
And developed a quake inside me.
You mesmerized me, captivated me
And you captured my whole being.
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Amitava (21.11.2015)
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WOW' such an eloquent penning on deepest possible love for your mate. It's just amazing. I envy your dedicated love for her. So intensly it's elaborated in an easy flow, fantastic write......10,10 and 10
Thank you Srabanti for appreciating my poem with your excellent comment.
A stunning promulgation of love...! Those wide eyes with the depth of a lake That captivating smile with a dimple on your cheek- So magnetic and so infiltrating they were, Who totally fantasized and captured my whole being! Beautiful lines! I can imagine the depth of admiration, you have for her!
The captivation by an haunting, mesmerizing and bewitching persona has made the poem itself more than captivating. Enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.
I felt the Heaven on earth By holding and clasping you I enjoyed the thrill of walking in ‘EDEN’ While we two walked under the moon’s silvery beam In that sandy and solitary bay. Beautiful expressions of love, you have expressed your feelings in beautiful poetic language, thanks for sharing a nice poem,
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4/23/2024 10:42:24 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Wow Amitava! ! ! This poem of Rahkee is absolutely amazing! You have brilliantly captured your unconditional love for her in every line! It's beautiful, mystical, capturing the mind and heart of my being totally! Love like yours is so perfect, every woman wishes to have the love you have given to Rakhee, your wife. To treasure someone so much, so intensely is captivating - Divine! Your words have been written to the rhythm of your love for her, they just flow from your pen naturally, filled with meaning, passion, desire that you gave to her yourself. What an amazing portrait of your life and love together you have written here, Amitava! ! Absolutely love this poem! You have definitely surpassed all boundaries with this poem, would give you millions of 10's if possible! Thank you for sharing your heart, Amitava, so few men have this wonderful innate gift to love and not be afraid to show it in any way! You my dear, Sur are unique! RoseAnn