Captive Poem by alireza asgari

Captive

Rating: 5.0


Captive in my constellation
Two little fishes
Orbiting
Again and again
I'm not your cliff
See the ocean
Far from us
Captive in our bowl
Waiting for stones
Beak full of fires crows coming instead
Captive
Captive in towers

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 02 September 2012

Deep and thought provoking! A few powerful words that along with a rich imagery clearly shows that you are talented and have creativity in your works! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! The Mighty One above may Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo-New York City

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 02 September 2012

Well, this is totally right my dear friend and country mate, not only the fishes, our souls some how are captivated by our wishes. nice poem with great meaning. so good.

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