Carmen Poem by rebo bebo

Carmen



I fall in unfair love
My lover is kind and tough
Faces of him wanna appear
That's cause my fear
But i don't surrender
I am like the thunder
I let it go
Not really slow
Nothing gonna face my will
My freedom can defend and kill
Whatever the results be
My freedom means me
I am not a chair
I am here to share
I am not for him alone
I have relatives tone

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Interesting read, unfair love...has no balance! Well done! ; D

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Marieta Maglas 09 July 2010

lyric lines that invite the reader to deep thought..very well conceived poem....

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