Castles Of The Sand Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

Castles Of The Sand



From the sand comes a picture
a picture painted true of you
Relish your home you will do have when
child to you dose have it's color drew.
Oceans shade the mountains view will
bring to you
the time you take rare color
find in you.
Mirror holds the view inside the soul
of you sands forever
cross for evever bring
a diffrent soul.

Thursday, December 18, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: green
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rachel Butler 28 July 2015

Many thoughts and feeling shared here a real rollacoaster

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pied piper 18 December 2008

The soul is the most beautiful piece of us all, and it can also be the darkest. Regardless, our true selves will always shine through. Well penned.

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Barbara Terry 18 December 2008

This is very deep, and makes the reader take a deep look into ourselves. The soul is sometimes different than the body, and that is where the true color of our lives is. We are who we are in our souls, and we have to be true to ourselves, because nobody else will be. Thank you for sharing, and I am giving you a 10+. Love & hugs, Barbara

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James McLain

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From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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