Caught Alive. Poem by Fay Slimm

Caught Alive.

Rating: 5.0


What is it that draws me daily
As soon as I wake, .... to his side?
Fills me with unfettered longing.
No words are ever enough.
I know I must ride
On the nearest touch.
This bond is true, strongly framed
With heart, mind and soul.......
Who could have arranged
Such a fate? .......... it eats wholly
Into my psyche, and so deep
It will not let me go...... caught alive
By this destiny,
I find always and ever repeated
The thought of......Allure.
Is there no survival?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

a sweet poem fay..check my latest post cheater on poem hunter..

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Ian Bowen 15 July 2009

Fay, top class piece of writing. Loved the 'strongly framed' line.10/10 Ian

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 15 July 2009

Sweet poem Fay, as always... Andy 10

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Catrina Heart 15 July 2009

You caught me with your enchanting words Fay...lovely 10

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Smiley Hooker 27 July 2009

Oh...that doesn't sound you really want to get away from it-lol! Beautiful and so passionate write, Fay. Thanks for the enjoyment :)

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an alluring poem fay...says a lot more than in words

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Bob Gibson 15 July 2009

Captured, entrapped, hook line and sinker your heart is beating like a shot from a gun totally engulfed in the flame of passion your caught alive by the power of one

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Sandra Martyres 15 July 2009

A very alluring piece Fay...a fascinating write 10+

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Stephen Stirk 15 July 2009

a brilliant and thoughtful piece. Love the imaginative and unique direction, and word play. I note that your poetical inspiration is rife, and that your output is amazing. Best Steve

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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