Treasure Island

Owain Glyn


Changes


I swam within the depths of you,
The waters warm and calm.
The currents soft, a gentle flow,
protected from all harm.

You smiled at me, a gentle breeze,
Caressed my troubled soul.
One gaze from your, soft, caring eyes,
Made what was broken, whole.

A touch from slender fingers,
Would set my heart afire.
A kiss from tender perfumed lips,
Would stimulate desire.

Winter held no power,
To chill the love that burned.
Your voice, a message on the wind,
Would tell of spring, returned.

I thought a love, that burned so bright,
could never pass away.
Yet here I sit, in sadness, cloaked,
Alone, bereft, today.
_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _
Owain Glyn

Submitted: Saturday, April 13, 2013
Edited: Friday, October 04, 2013

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A description of how love can change.

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  • Aria Siren (4/20/2013 9:53:00 AM)

    Changes fast too doesn't it? Beautiful words strung together to describe a horrible feeling at the end. I particularly enjoyed this verse:

    Winter held no power,
    To chill the love that burned.
    Your voice, a message on the wind,
    Would tell of spring, returned. (Report) Reply

  • Diane Hine (4/18/2013 7:37:00 PM)

    A sad conclusion it's true, but this beautiful poem shows how wonderful it was while it lasted. (Report) Reply

  • Lynne Fincherspringarden (4/17/2013 2:12:00 AM)

    Wonderful love story. Delicate and gentle words flower this poem with loves sweet hope... and a tearful ending as well. Your capacity to express the full spectrum of human emotion, love, sadness, joy, whimsy and so on in all your poetry is truly a special gift. (Report) Reply

  • Karen Sinclair (4/16/2013 3:40:00 PM)

    So beautiful. Intricate and truly heartfelt. Adored this tyvm...I'm so sorry if I read this understanding it fully ty. Karen. (Report) Reply

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