Changes Poem by uder pressure

Changes



i'm in the crowd
looking for a way out
i'm in the church
looking for the way in
a heart so full of good
but a life so full of bad
bring me to the place
of peace and serenity
where you will be
because I will wait
for you
But will you wait for me?

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Chip Reed 21 September 2008

so you say you are a part of the crowd, but you dont want to be, and you say you're in church looking for a way in when you say that do you mean spiritually im just sort of confused

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Jesse Rudolph 15 September 2008

No one waits. We are all too selfish. Reguardless of peoples selfishness, you are a good writer.

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