Chaotic Seconds Poem by Marieta Maglas

Chaotic Seconds

Rating: 3.0


Your tongue becomes a
stretch of your
scream. It is, in fact,
a lying tongue, which
breaks the complex
truths until they are
transformed into simple
meanings, exactly in the same manner
the hours are
decomposed into chaotic
seconds to be recomposed
for new hallucinating time. Our
erratic thoughts anguish inside
our ignorance and our resignation. Our
spaces seep into another
common one. The light
dances on our exhausted
bodies all its
shades of red. We
love each other in
our dream.



Poem by Marieta Maglas

Thursday, April 1, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: words
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James Mclain 01 April 2010

some times i think you read my mind..'dear'....iip .............. :)

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D H 02 April 2010

Sometimes I wonder, How many ideas we shall until we ran out of them For once we ran out We will be reliving the past But poetry shall bloom with your poem You set a new stage of veiw +10

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Luo Zhihai 16 December 2014

Merry christmas! I like this poem!

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Prasanna Kumari 14 November 2012

reaching from chaos to loving dream is beautiful...

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Clarence Prince 23 December 2016

A deceiving person has a lying tongue, and can be trusted.

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Unnikrishnan E S 23 December 2016

Hi Marieta, Congratulations on getting selected as poet of of the day. And this poem, which so well-versed (sorry for the pun) , deserves it. Congrats.

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Christina Simmons 23 December 2016

True words! In dreams we always seem to have so much more patient LOVE. That can endure until the end of time. Beautiful! ! !

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Bernard F. Asuncion 23 December 2016

Well-written++++++++++++++++++++++ congrats on being selected for the day.....

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Savita Tyagi 23 December 2016

The light dances on our exhausted bodies.....beautiful poem. Full of complex meaning and excellent style. Congratulations for poem of the day place Marieta Maglas.

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Tom Allport 23 December 2016

screaming simplicity becomes condensed into utter chaos, then sleep prevails

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Marieta Maglas

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Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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