Cheat Poem by Sharlie Goddard

Cheat

Rating: 5.0


How do I know when
I hold a daisy
That the petals will say that he loves me?
I will pluck them off in twins and triplets if it
Means at the end will.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Preeti - is here! 31 August 2006

Hi Sharlie, I wrote a poem called 'petals' its on similar lines of he love me, loves me not. But your poem, its given me an amazing idea, i can pluck 2-3 at a time and get the petals to say that he loves me a lot. nice poem :) ..kinda cute.. and clever too. Preets

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Catastrophe King 30 August 2006

I loved your idea... this is a good write. Wish these petals could really decide on our relationships! ! !

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Chuck Audette 01 June 2006

I enjoyed the idea of the cheat here. Spelling error in last line? -chuck

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