~ Checkmate Again ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ Checkmate Again ~

Rating: 4.3


Pondering
Readers commentate
Of late
Perspiring to be:
Poet!

Working on words
Stand on mark to
Get set
And gooooooo…
Lo!
Words are
I find
Grotesque foe! !

Dear readers
Again I regret
Unless you surrogate
Can’t be a Poet

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shalini Joseph 09 September 2010

So true gal! We are all seeking to become poets, but poetry comes straight from the heart and onto the paper!

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Dove Allen 17 September 2010

Game ain't... ;) ... over yet madam! The queen surely protects her king? Or does the king takes his queen to sacrifice to get out of checkmate? Only the poet knows...muwahahaha! ;) Great sequel Niv...thanks for the encore!

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 14 August 2010

Yes, readers are the critics that make a poet great.

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 24 September 2009

I believe, anybody is a poet who dare to think and write like one. Keep writing my poet friend..a 10

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Sufi Shah 18 August 2010

........ to be a good poet, ........is as difficult as to be a saint or a sufi......... .coz both are seekers of peace........................ ..and im blessing u to be a peace maker

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Subbaraman N V 18 January 2011

Yes; we surrogate! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Right. Do you agree that you are a poet!

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Ajay Seshadri 27 November 2010

You have brought out the difference between poetry and philosophy in this poem. The word Surrogate, I can see is an imagery. Philosophy does not view truth as conception but as inevitable. In poetry any idea however obvious or profound has to conceived in a new light. Very insightful poem! I really enjoyed it. Short and powerful in impact. Effort has its place in life but at some point inspiration takes over. Thanks for sharing.10/10

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Miroslava Odalovic 15 October 2010

I agree with you. Art is an in between, (among) thing flow, what exactly did you mean by surrogate? Hope I understood.

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Brendan Mccallum 27 September 2010

An interesting little ditty indeed, Niv, reading through your comments on this piece (and there are a few) looks like you have sparked a very friendly debate on what may or may not be poetry and who might or might not be a poet, great post and super thread; -) BG

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John Rolland 26 September 2010

poetry has many faces, variety of poems is a treasure and very interesting matter who can set perplexity....Enjoyed a lot.

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