Ben Gieske


Cheesy Moon (Ghazal) - Poem by Ben Gieske

Look up and gaze at craters on the cheesy moon.
A cow, a spoon jumping over the cheesy moon.

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Comments about Cheesy Moon (Ghazal) by Ben Gieske

  • Rookie Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (8/18/2009 2:11:00 AM)

    Written with such flair and finesse Ben and I can see why it deserved to be published! I am not a lover of the Ghazal format, but after reading this I can see that the repetitions do not have to be boring. love Karin (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 233 Points Kesav Easwaran (8/5/2008 9:45:00 PM)

    a very choosy moon yours this cheesy moon, Ben...a cheesy poem this 10/10 (Report) Reply








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