Dave Alan Walker

Silver Star - 3,699 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

Child In Your Arms - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Child in your arms
Will always love you

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Comments about Child In Your Arms by Dave Alan Walker

  • Rookie - 0 Points Mervyn Graham (3/20/2014 6:47:00 AM)

    I can hear your bluesman singing this... love it (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Ashleigh Mellon (3/16/2012 3:01:00 PM)

    Your Poem Touched my heart, mate, I invite you to read Let The World Gracefully Shine Again Ode to Michael Jackson Heal The World Tears Of An Autistic Woman And He's Out Of My Life

    Once again, Beautiful Poem, It is well written. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ashleigh Mellon (3/16/2012 3:01:00 PM)

    Your Poem Touched my heart, mate, I invite you to read Let The World Gracefully Shine Again Ode to Michael Jackson Heal The World Tears Of An Autistic Woman And He's Out Of My Life

    Once again, Beautiful Poem, It is well written. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Karen Deeks (3/10/2012 7:45:00 AM)

    This had me in tears... My friend went through this two years ago and seeing her and her other halfs pain as they said goodbye was something I'll never forget.. Mother father watch over me
    And jesus will watch over you
    ... Thank you Karen (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Joyce Vajda (3/9/2012 1:02:00 AM)

    I enjoyed your child in your arms poem. I know that by reading this it was a devine inspiration. Bless you and I look forward to reading more of your wonderful inspiring poems..Bless you Joyce (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Guenael Oristel (12/11/2011 5:08:00 PM)

    no words could describe this poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 470 Points Ruth Walters (11/1/2011 1:14:00 PM)

    This reads like a song....very heartfelt and passionate (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jacqui Broad (10/24/2011 5:48:00 PM)

    This is a song you've written, yes? I didn't want to read it for a long time, because of the title. I was right, it made me sad. Because I think you've lost a child, before you had Lilly... It touched a chord, for sure... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lady Keys *rainbow Gang* (10/14/2011 4:59:00 PM)

    omg it left me into tears such words i love it keep writing


    sassy, sexy, and superior (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 25 Points Jinal Oswal (9/27/2011 5:34:00 AM)

    So touching, it shows the care, the love that binds us with our parents.... :) Its truly touchy (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jade Ali (9/27/2011 5:19:00 AM)

    So beautiful and touching... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie CB Carlos (9/22/2011 7:20:00 AM)

    written from the heart.. I can feel the emotions in it. Nicely done. :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 17 Points Winston Harding (9/18/2011 12:45:00 PM)

    Feel your words. Wonderful! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Debra Martin (9/18/2011 9:06:00 AM)

    So very sweet yet tender too.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Stefanie Fontker (9/17/2011 8:49:00 AM)

    Your poetry is quite lyrical, I can admire that, you do a good job of it. This is very touching, as always, you inspire emotion. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,244 Points Unwritten Soul (9/12/2011 11:22:00 AM)

    You repeating this lines double each time:

    Child in your arms
    Will always love you

    That show how deep love a child to the ones who raise him...Dave, there's something is visible by this hidden soul in your writing...I can sense the energy of it (Unwritten Soul can detect any soul talking hahaha joking) ...but the moving lines really beautiful made..well done_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shadow Girl (9/12/2011 7:17:00 AM)

    very powerful, very touching, very sad. Beautifully written with pain and love. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Claudia Krizay (9/9/2011 7:57:00 PM)

    another very powerful, very sad- a profoundly moving poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Claudia Krizay (9/9/2011 7:55:00 PM)

    A moving, beautiful write- (Report) Reply










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