Child Predators Aftermath Poem by louis rams

Child Predators Aftermath

Rating: 5.0


his sexual desires and fantasies he could not control
this is what the police were told.
castration! is what we should do
but it's not up to me or you.

the law must pass a resolution
it is just one solution.
it will stop them from getting an erection
but it is not of perfection.

they say that castration is inhumane
and their minds will always be the same.

so treat the mind and the body will follow
leaving the shell empty and hollow.

even if the castation is done
the images will always enter their minds
and he will become the sexual observer
instead of the predator server.

what the law has to do- is zap that part of the brain
where he'll never think the same.
cut it out like the cancer it is
and wipe away the predator sin.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Christine Kerr 30 May 2009

I really enjoy your writes on taboo subjects Louis. Not everyone can pull it off so gracefully. I'm sure it takes a strong mind to think above the norm to speak without negative emotions on such sore subjects and you do it with a smoothness of such grace. I commend you for that Louis. Got one up your sleeve on ATI SOCIAL BEHAVIOUR. A Big 10

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Kranthi Pothineni 29 May 2009

Poetry is to make a reader think and has a poet you had achieved it.

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Sandra Fowler 29 May 2009

A strong subject. Many questions, but so few answers. You are to be commended for this thought provoking write. Kind regards, Sandra

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Heather S 29 May 2009

very true indeed a predators mind can never be changed, no matter what i have learned this the hard way

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a good remedy..it is more than cancer...nice piece with a wit to it

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