Child Understands Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Child Understands

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There was no one to support
There was no elder to report
Father was businessman but not with enough of education
He was pulling life cart with strong relation

“Papa, I have passed with distinction”
He will smile gently with satisfaction
I could see the visual change on his face
He was never discontented in competitive race

“I will need new set of books”
He will shake head and helplessly look
We were really poor and hand to mouth
I new the inner fact and truth

“Have second hand from senior students”
He will gently speak but offer no more comments
I understood his pain and gave no more botheration
“I will take care of books, papa” then he will not raise any question

Final school days were over
“I must support and provide cover”
I always thought and felt so much
They were very much hopeful with trust

“Why not go for army service”?
Bright future with free food and cloth’s promise
I took it by heart and went for interview
My inner conscious imposed clear views

How far parents go on accommodating!
The demands of children while not stating
Real position and economic plight
Some of the children understand it right

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 April 2014

welcome Shujat Ahmad, Jeremy Bazinaw 3 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 April 2014

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 April 2014

So genuine Susanna Correya22 minutes ago Your poem embodies the true situation of poverty stricken families. Your portrayal of the understanding child is very touching, though I did manage to scout that in a few places, articles were not inserted. But this is a very touching piece. Good job. Kindly review some of my poems too! Please and thank you. :) Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 April 2014

nice Ismail Wikimedia24 minutes ago i like it

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 April 2014

There was no one to support There was no elder to report

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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