Hebert Logerie

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Chocolate And Vanilla, Nice Dream - Poem by Hebert Logerie

A beautiful Sunday afternoon
Amid the estival breeze of a silent moon
You and I did enjoy a few scoops
Of our favorite dessert; oops, oops
We hugged, kissed and teased each other
And uneventfully realized when mixed together
Chocolate and vanilla esthetically are wonderful
Miraculous, incredible, visual and sensual.

Voluminous kisses, voluptuous hugs
Velvety waves and intermittent moaning
Of ecstasy until the next morning
Surprisingly, mosquitoes and bugs
Stayed away, where we became one
Darling! We do know how to have fun
Chocolate and vanilla are two vital ingredients
That nourished bodies and soul, soil and plants.

Comments about Chocolate And Vanilla, Nice Dream by Hebert Logerie

  • Dwi Utami (7/12/2010 12:46:00 AM)

    He.he.he: p good creation of you, : 10x10=100% point for you. (Report) Reply

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  • (9/19/2009 11:01:00 AM)

    You created a very warm, inviting atmosphere, and a smooth style of words with this write. Nicely done (Report) Reply

  • (9/18/2009 12:12:00 AM)

    OHHH! LA! LA! I CAN TASTE IT! =D (Report) Reply

  • (8/23/2009 12:02:00 PM)

    I really love this poem, could never have one without the other,10/10! Another favorite added to my list (Report) Reply

  • Aubrey silver (8/22/2009 9:58:00 PM)

    this is a great poem
    as are the rest you had asked me to read
    so keep writhing this way
    it will make a wonderfull poem your mind
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  • (8/20/2009 11:43:00 AM)

    It is realy good poem. (Report) Reply

  • (8/14/2009 12:05:00 AM)

    So cute and tasty atmosphere. (Report) Reply

  • (8/12/2009 12:59:00 PM)

    Oh how very cute and how many people can relate to.
    Two nice things are one delicious ice cream sundae.!

    I'd love it if you read my poem Healthy, just the opposite.
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  • (8/12/2009 1:41:00 AM)

    Togetherness is sharing the two. Two became one and so was all that was related. Chocolate and vanilla is the two with the lick of one you would want the other. Very well written. I enjoyed the beginning the middle and the end. (Report) Reply

  • (8/11/2009 5:38:00 PM)

    I enjoyed this very delicious poem...inviting descriptions of chocolate and vanilla. (Report) Reply

  • (8/9/2009 12:15:00 PM)

    wow what a beautiful description.... i just loved it..... superb (Report) Reply

  • (8/8/2009 10:00:00 PM)

    I read all the comments. Same feeling. Deliciously created. (Report) Reply

  • (8/8/2009 10:13:00 AM)

    Excellent write. Enjoyable. (Report) Reply

  • (8/7/2009 5:46:00 PM)

    What a lovely yet powerful read. Excellent contrast. This poem made me smile also. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • (8/7/2009 2:07:00 PM)

    This love's truly powerful. I see it attracts even the pride of the night (Moon) while it's yet day! This is cool. (Report) Reply

  • (8/7/2009 2:38:00 AM)

    Sum up it is good to serve chocolate with vanilia or serve vanila with chocolate. O had a poem Chilli compass cracker o do reminber where o put it. May be latter i bring it out again. It is about newer term in worlds of mixtures (Report) Reply

  • (8/7/2009 2:30:00 AM)

    DReams are very good to have chocoilate serve with vanila (Report) Reply

  • (8/6/2009 4:48:00 PM)

    This poem made me smile, keep it up! (Report) Reply

  • (8/4/2009 8:15:00 PM)

    Ha, oka den..This is great and full of passion! (Report) Reply

  • (8/4/2009 4:00:00 PM)

    this poem was very passionate with ecstacy
    the chocolate and vanilla really captured the emtions/feelings behind the words of this beautiful poetry.
    its one of my favourite poems i've read so far! ! !
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 23, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 24, 2011

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