Chocolate (Haiku) Poem by Alexandria Rios

Chocolate (Haiku)

Rating: 5.0


Crunchy, Chewy, Brown
Heavenly sweetness taste
No more once eaten

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjali Mandokhot 01 March 2008

no more once eaten....the end is so thoughtful every thing got its end relish ur chocolates slowly! its finished bt it fills us with a pleasant feeling wishes anjali

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Subbaraman N V 01 March 2008

Lovely! As sweet as chocolates!

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Fading Heart 31 May 2009

You have great talent and it has showed in this poem

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Taylor S 26 May 2009

Yummy..... :) Can I please have some lol

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Excellent! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Michael Pruchnicki 01 March 2008

Alex, succinct and as tasty as a Mars bar!

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Geovanni Leaño 01 March 2008

what i like about haiku is that we are like reading the shortest pocket book ever! ^_^ thanks for sharing!

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