Choice, In A Predicament Poem by Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Choice, In A Predicament

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Aerodynamically shaped body being
logical locomotary need, most prime
for naturally effective movement of any being
not always obliged; bungled at times, in fixing
to the dismay and disappointment of none

Intermixed laterals with cephalo-caudal parts
On dorso-ventrally pressed and flattened
anterior-posteriorly compressed torso
the Crustacean clan, facing the dilemma,
chose sideways walk, over a volition of extinction

Choice, In A Predicament
Saturday, October 24, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: existence
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 25 October 2015

Great diction! The predicament of the crab clan is described in such a wonderful way! I had to do google search to get the full impact of the write! A 10

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Jaishree Nair 25 October 2015

A good choice rather than facing extinction. Nice

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Kelly Kurt 25 October 2015

A wonderfully worded poem, Jayatissa. Thanks

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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