Choices Poem by Fred Babbin

Choices

Rating: 2.8


Will it be tea,
Or will it be sherry?

Must I be sad?
Or can I be merry?

File it now
Or leave it ‘til later?

Should I complain?
Or must I be silent?

Should I dress casual?
Or will it be ‘’dress up’’?

Should I kiss her?
Maybe I shouldn’t.

Should I touch her?
Will she be angry?

Surgery?
Radiation’s better?

Should I be?
Or maybe (like Hamlet)

How good is this poem?
Maybe it isn’t.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rachel Butler 21 September 2009

Should I be? Or maybe (like Hamlet) Rachel Ann Butler

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 06 May 2009

One must reach a state of 'Choicless Consciousness', and then all problem ends..........because higher conciousness chooses thing for you...............Indeed Good Write.............

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Bethany Buhl 14 July 2008

yeah no ever knows if what they write is good or not, I think this poem makes me think I have choices and it's up to you to makes them. just find the one you like the best at the time.

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Duncan Wyllie 19 June 2008

Choices, I'm not one to talk about making the right ones always, but I did like the honesty of this write Love duncan X

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