Choir Of Coral Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Very poetic. Instead of 'deep', 'depth'. Instead of 'sang', 'sung' (the past participle) . The last lines elevate the poem.

I thought this poem wae very peaceful.(My two brothers were commercial divers.)

fantastic lil poem. i liked the images..

Pleasant and sweet choir! Great write!

i jsut had a drive along the beach...two distinct shades of gray-dark on the sea, light on the sky and a dazzling summer heat!

Greatly done. MJG... Of the world of poetry.

nice one! ! ! ! ! i really enjoied it..10++

deep lines.very touching tribute.wonderfull.posted 10 surya

The lines themselves put a smile on my face... great work, sir! 10+++ MIMI

a beautiful write and best dedication to a poet........always sea breeze makes exotice dreams.......