Choosing Him(X) Poem by Mrs. Cynosure

Choosing Him(X)

Rating: 3.9


You dealt the cards
Today
I began to cry
Inside
The only thing that
Run wild through
My mind
Is where did I go
Wrong
Why is he so much
Better
Then me
I did nothing to you
But
Give you my everything
You would tell me
To just stop
Fighting for you
Well baby all I can say is
I can’t
And
I wont
Not over my dead body
Will I or should I
Stop
Fighting for the people
I truly love
Yes I do
Strongly
Passionately
Love you
To the greatest level
Someone could ever
Love another person
You asked me
What a heart break is
To me
Well sweetheart you are
You are my heart break
Baby please
You have to understand
That I’m in love
With you
And always will be
So when you tell me
I love him
Think about how much
I die
Inside

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Hitesh Sheth 01 November 2008

Not blame me for choosing him, Who routinely stalks my livingl drreams, If my heart always cries for him, Do you think is it my fault or sin. Good poem full of emotions: Dr Hitesh C Sheth

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C. P. Sharma 25 February 2009

Sweet outpouring of sincere emotions. CP

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Bill Thomas 30 January 2009

Wow. Raw, passionate, emotion as it should be: you leave much untold, but just enough to make the poem tantalisingly right.

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C J 17 December 2008

Honey i'm wonder that some of your poems are actions of your life, and i trully believe is so, and sometimes i guess it make you comfortable to have that relief here, these poem is more about you, i like the end part, I love him Think about how much I die Inside that show very close dedication to your soulmate. keep going.

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Sebastine Humaemo 14 December 2008

becca.....this poem comes under your best list....i specially like the last two lines.................much touching and true.......sebastine.....

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Egi David Perdana 01 November 2008

wow is purely different, it's very unusual sense, good! !

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Mrs. Cynosure

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Junction City Oregon
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