Paul Moosberg

Rookie (6-25-82 / Texas)

Christmas Day - Poem by Paul Moosberg

Christmas is so merry, at this special time of year
Christmas is extraordinary, as long as you are here

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Comments about Christmas Day by Paul Moosberg

  • Rookie Herbert Nehrlich1 (12/14/2006 4:24:00 AM)

    I suggest you take the stumbles out as shown below:

    Inside my heart I’ll jump and dance, excited just to see
    The sparkling beauty in your glance, upon this Christmas eve...

    Just a thought but it's a good, pleasant poem.
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  • Rookie Eila Mahima Jaipaul (12/13/2006 11:10:00 PM)

    it is very much filled with christmas hope.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Terry Donovan (12/13/2006 8:57:00 AM)

    Very nice, happy, atmospheric poem - just the way Christmas should be (and once was!) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jessica Roberts (12/13/2006 8:26:00 AM)

    this is really good poem and you captured it very well (Report) Reply








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