(July 15,1999 / Barinas)

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Christmas Night

Christmas night,
Cheerful lights.
Sky so tight,
Dawn´s first blight.

Heavy raindrops,
Become teardrops.
Little mountains,
Become hills.
Small fountains,
Become ill.
On Christmas night,
They never will.

Christmas night,
Time to shine.
Cheerful light,
Heaven´s might.

Little star,
Blinking lark.
Shiny arc,
Lightful mark.

Sky so bright,
Endless line.
Time to shine,
Christmas night!

Submitted: Saturday, January 12, 2013


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  • Joseph Burke (4/20/2013 9:19:00 AM)

    Nicely written, capturing the magic of christmas night in a minimum of words and a maximum of feelings. A clever synopsis. Really enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing.

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  • Titi Dale (1/12/2013 6:52:00 PM)

    Great poem, here! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Awesome rhyming! ! ! ! ! Although my misuse of exclamation marks probably isn't helping here, I must point out that, even though this is a short poem, it explains a lot :)
    Bye for now,
    Titi.

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