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Shania K. Younce

Rookie - 223 Points (4-18-1996 / I can´t remember.)

'Ciel'


How pretty is ciel? Like the blue forever going. Like the white disapearing. Like the golden rise shining. Like the gray spreading. Like the above and below colors forming. Like the water dropping. Like the translucent air cooling. Like the thing beating. Like brightened dots forever glowing. Like the shimmer of beams pouring. Like the soft light dreaming. How pretty is ciel.

Submitted: Monday, July 29, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, July 30, 2013

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I made this up in my first period class for english. Title translation: 'Sky'. The word ciel is french. Please comment at will and with honesty.

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