Shania K. Younce

Rookie - 421 Points (4-18-1996 / I can´t remember.)

'Ciel' - Poem by Shania K. Younce

How pretty is ciel? Like the blue forever going. Like the white disapearing. Like the golden rise shining. Like the gray spreading. Like the above and below colors forming. Like the water dropping. Like the translucent air cooling. Like the thing beating. Like brightened dots forever glowing. Like the shimmer of beams pouring. Like the soft light dreaming. How pretty is ciel.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

I made this up in my first period class for english. Title translation: 'Sky'. The word ciel is french. Please comment at will and with honesty.

Comments about 'Ciel' by Shania K. Younce

  • Rookie - 42 Points Adheez Van Der Beanthz (8/14/2013 1:23:00 PM)

    beautiful poem with beautiful words
    really enjoy to read it (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, July 29, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, July 30, 2013


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