Cigarette Poem by Rahul Aithal

Cigarette

Rating: 5.0


As you hold me to impress,
the first error is made,
you use me in depress,
when nerves have frayed.

You roll me with your tongue
and slowly inhale,
I will enter your lung
to break and frail.

I ease your pressure
and calm your fears,
I become your treasure
but lessen your years.

I am your breath,
you are my life,
I am your death,
will cut like a knife.

Your days start with me,
I am an addictive device,
Now you can't part with me,
as I become your vice.

on your death-bed and energy seeping,
you curse, calling me heartless,
your eyes swollen-red and weeping,
I smile, seeing you breathless.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allemagne Roßmann 20 April 2011

well written smoking is a killer instinct smoking smokes our life away

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Allemagne Roßmann 20 April 2011

Rauchen kann tödlich sein dhumpan jaanleva hai......................................................................well written

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Anjali Sinha 04 August 2010

wonderful rahul, you have a good sense of imagery well done - keep writing and sharing I like your poems -10 anjali

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Kelly Aragon 16 January 2010

That was awesome! Cirgarettes KILL, people! Don't underestimate them!

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