Sandra Martyres

Rookie - 1 Points (5th October / Mumbai - India)

Cinderella - Poem by Sandra Martyres

It’s Midnight my love
Its time for me to disappear
And leave behind my
Golden slipper
For you to find
Making sure that
There will be another
Evening of pure delight

Don’t stop me my love
It’s a written rule from above
That your Cinderella
Must leave no matter what
At midnight on the dot
For if she does not
Yours will not
Be a happy lot

Please turn around my love
Cast a glance at the
Beauty that abounds
In this lovely gathering
Of dolled up ladies waiting
To play the game of mating
While you do that
Like lightening
I will be gone
For now
but I promise
I will come back again

Comments about Cinderella by Sandra Martyres

  • Gold Star - 45,623 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (12/7/2014 9:09:00 AM)

    A beautiful and imaginative poem about cinderella (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 788 Points Patti Masterman (8/18/2009 8:22:00 AM)

    This is so clever and entertaining. I still love all those childhood tales. Never can get tired of those. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Bob Blackwell (8/14/2009 9:29:00 AM)

    Quite delightful, I was brought up on Pantomine and Fairy Stories, they still trigger the imagination from time to time. Cinderella's was confident to allow her prince the pick of all the ladies. But in life to we should be able to choose. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Pamela Chalecka (8/12/2009 5:28:00 PM)

    Something different, love it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,190 Points Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (8/12/2009 9:15:00 AM)

    the galapping words are soothing to read. shan (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ted M (7/3/2009 6:49:00 AM)

    Very graceful and romantic. Cinderella story brought back in a refreshing way. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lady Grace (6/22/2009 11:50:00 PM)

    what a nice ending..beautiful and well presented..grace (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 180 Points Sathyanarayana M V S (6/19/2009 10:34:00 AM)

    Pure magic of words and expressions.Reminds me some old classics from poets like Shelly and Wordsworth. Very beautifully crafted poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Vidi Writes (6/14/2009 2:13:00 AM)

    This is the most lovely poem
    Very gracious in the plea
    Touched deep within to rejoice.

    Love, a miracle of all time
    From the past till date and in future
    The aroma, so strong
    And sure all have to turn to it.
    Cinderella - the poem, i love you.

    Enjoyed to the brim. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ~ Jon London ~ (6/13/2009 1:01:00 PM)

    What a loving image you've created here Sandra my dear friend...beautiful in every way...keep exploring my lovely...wonderful job (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 112 Points Meggie Gultiano (6/11/2009 5:54:00 AM)

    an exciting piece.Wish i am a cindrella too..but i sleep
    Lovely words, my dear (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 22 Points Chandrashekar A Posy Poet (6/11/2009 5:52:00 AM)

    an impressive image! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 118 Points Rani Turton (6/10/2009 10:33:00 AM)

    Deftly turned and very imaginative. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Alf Hutchison (6/9/2009 11:58:00 AM)

    Sandra I often tell folks I was born in the wrong times....I love the pomp and ceremony...days when men were men and woman were all beautifully attired...A lovely look at the 'Cinderella' days... Well done fond regards Alf (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Carol Gall (6/9/2009 7:49:00 AM)

    love this Sandra Cinderella at her best (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 13 Points Anjali Sinha (6/9/2009 6:23:00 AM)

    this is lovely
    i see Cinderella in new light
    certainly a tenner from me
    anjali (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (6/9/2009 6:23:00 AM)

    Pure enchantment. Classic romance. Your Cinderella
    is very beguiling.10, of course.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shashendra Amalshan (6/9/2009 4:07:00 AM)

    beautiful passionte....moving one indeed Sadra...I like such narrative, interesting one....I really felt it....beautigul write...thanks for this one....A+++

    with lots of love
    shan (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Carl Harris (6/8/2009 1:44:00 PM)

    This is a adorable and even slightly sensuous poem about Cinderella, Sandra, and I didn't realize that she was quite a flirt! My, My what would the Disney folks say if they knew she was inviting princes and such to her boudoir after midnight! You made this tale a very charming and witty write, as well as an enjoyable one! Carl. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 7 Points Dr Hitesh Sheth (6/8/2009 11:40:00 AM)

    beautiful imaginery................I can visulalize golden slippers and cindrella............A Good Write.......... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 7, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, June 22, 2009

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