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Cinderella

If my name was Cinderella
You could be the prince
I could wear my sparkling prom dress
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Comments about this poem (Cinderella by Loraine Lotter )

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  • Holly Dvergsten (3/11/2013 11:42:00 AM)

    overall the poem is good, however the first stanza is a little rough
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  • Angela Bahareva (2/7/2013 1:58:00 PM)

    It sounds like great lyrics to a song

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  • Monet Al-amin (6/7/2012 5:03:00 PM)

    Love it! Written beautifully!

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  • Taylor Cullen (3/19/2012 7:00:00 PM)

    Love it! ! ! ! It was beautiful to read! ! ! !

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