Brian Taylor

Silver Star - 3,312 Points (England)

Cinderella's Shoes - Poem by Brian Taylor

The ugly sister, Alice,
glared at the mirror with reflected malice;
gave a grin
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  • (4/25/2016 5:37:00 AM)

    excellent poem
    More fragments of splintering glass
    were swept up by footman Fred.
    'What a woracious woman! ' Fred said.
    'A most woracious woman! '
    nice wordings
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  • (7/26/2015 10:32:00 AM)

    A great work. Congrats (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (12/5/2014 10:17:00 AM)

    Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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  • Soulful Heart (11/30/2014 10:23:00 AM)

    triumph of goodnes and perseverence.......a fairy tale that evinces the age old wisdom... (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (5/30/2013 3:51:00 PM)

    poor cindrella was treated so badly by the wicked sisters, but in the end did she ever shine. Yes she did. lovely write (Report) Reply

  • (1/14/2010 8:10:00 PM)

    one of my favorite stories in childhood, you have an impressive vocabulary..i enjoyed it much (Report) Reply

  • (11/29/2008 7:21:00 AM)

    Dorothy sat and wondered
    If this was the place to be
    For just a short time earlier
    It was Toto and she
    Who had missed the flight to England
    And landed in this mess
    Where lads and ladies had
    A peculiar way to dress,
    And smoke and mirrors
    Were delivered by the press.

    Those shoes that others wanted
    Seemed just right for her
    And so through the looking glass
    She stepped and once again
    Was in
    (take a guess)


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