Circle Of Denial Poem by Wali Jamali
Circle Of Denial
[Circle Of Denial]
Love survives the trace-less jolts,
Of distrust, fear,
And ravaging desirs.
Yet, the circle of denial,
Thrive at cost,
Of feelings,
And sombre thoughts.
Monster rages,
Leaves smooth sailing ferries,
In hulls.
And the edifice,
Of love crumbles apart,
Within hailing distance,
Of glory.
Denial of love is the denial of life ....denial in the temple of life while worshipping in it rehan
words used, ambiance created, imagery so wonderful and alive. the idea your expression and all is stupendous my dear, in my opinion. wonderful piece and thanks for bringing your writing to our attention. beautiful talented poetess. a 10 dear. and i will re-read it over and over again
your poems are thought provoking. i enjoyed reading your work. take care and enjoy your poetic life.
great one! ...i like the way you end it.. endings should be poignant enuf to bring that choking feeling to the gullet.good work.
A very fine piece...circles of denial..everywhere where love dwells..they appear roaming fearless..loved the metaphors...thanks Love Gul
THIS ONE IS TRULY GREAT PIECE OF WRITING, , EACH WORD AND IMAGE BUILDS UP THE THEME.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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..within hailing distance of glory '..absorbing lines zoobiya. thanks..