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Brishti Mazumdar
(6/8/2009 11:18:00 AM) |
City-bus can’t cross the globe
Can’t find your cyber destination!
So true, dear....My journey thru your City Bus was enjoyable...10+...Brishti
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Raj Arumugam
(5/26/2009 2:26:00 AM) |
interesting medley of images and events...
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Genesis Bernaldez
(5/17/2009 7:19:00 AM) |
The title caught me. I knew it was different and modern. Different in theme, different in thoughts, I could say this is based on an experience while daydreaming. Haha, I'm not sure.; p This is inspiring, I'll write something like this.
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Ben Gieske
(12/16/2008 6:43:00 PM) |
You describe a very vivid and powerful scene. It leaves me in a bit of a quandary.
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palas kumar ray
(10/15/2008 8:20:00 AM) |
'City-bus is entering into the yesterdays
Yellow neon-evening is moving from tomorrows'
........................................................................WOW.
Did you see, I exclaim?
Tumar sange City-bus a charar maja-e alada.
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Raj Nandy
(9/29/2008 9:53:00 PM) |
Ashraful bhai, I liked the imagery, and the thought process reaching a climax in
the last two lines! Is it a translation from your Bengali one?
-Raj Nandy
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Gargi Saha
(9/24/2008 11:44:00 AM) |
A lovely poem.............10++++
Thanks for your nice comments on my poem Who Am I?
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Tsira Gogeshvili
(9/13/2008 11:01:00 AM) |
Ashraful, Interesting poems... Also it is perfectly written. The dream 'the noble has put' for the poet. But I would prefer mine the old car... Or on foot...
From me 10...
Tsira
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