Claim Nothing Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Claim Nothing

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She openly defies
And naturally flies
In her domain
With no chain

She is free to feel
And call at will
You are shy
The problem is therefore, why?

Each time she stares
And openly dares
You simply look down
Refuse to acknowledge and own

She is special and trustworthy
She has fear of almighty
You pick the right signal
Wait for spring’s arrival

She see no uncertainty
But asks blessings from almighty
For her mission to be successful
And for later part to remain peaceful

Rush not but respond
Match with her and correspond
She may readily concede
To your offer and accede

Love is not for asking
Showers are not for staking
So claim nothing over impossible
But long for and struggle

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 October 2013

She openly defies And naturally flies

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 October 2013

Lucifera Santez5 minutes ago liked it. :)

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 October 2013

KR BALAKRISHNAN5 minutes ago Nice poem with great thought. Comment +1 NICE

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 October 2013

Nice Lulu B3 minutes ago I like the beginning Comment +1 superb

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 October 2013

Gina Ancheta Agsaulio wow...great one, love it, thanks a lot Hasmukh Mehta my friend 12 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 October 2013

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 October 2013

Preeti Sabhar.. Each time she stares And openly dares

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 October 2013

« Delete » RAVISH.... K good description.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 October 2013

Love is not for asking Showers are not for staking So claim nothing over impossible But long for and struggle Excellent

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Marvin Brato 21 October 2013

Amazing write, truthful and real sentiments!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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