Clash Of Swords Poem by Conor Ross

Clash Of Swords

Rating: 5.0


The battlefield, a lonely hill, upon a country field
The enemies stand facing each other, swords drawn
They charge at each other, swords clashing
Swords swing, matching each other
Then a arrow hits the men, they fall
Blood mixing, the archer stares
The battle ended, a draw
Two deaths, one victor
The end

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nimal Dunuhinga 18 December 2009

Your swords are very sharp like life, Good attempt Conor!

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Zachary Glitch 18 December 2009

This reminds me of my favourite books and movie: The Lord Of The Rings. Good job. Keep it up. :)

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Marieta Maglas 18 December 2009

They charge at each other, swords clashing wonderful descriptive poem belonging to symbolism, very well written. 10

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Omar Ibrahim 18 December 2009

i think i had an epiphany from this poem....i liked it really.thanks for sharing!

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