Clean Wit.... [limerick; Short (Duh!): Humor; Dedicated To Valsa George; Personal] Poem by Bri Edwards

Clean Wit.... [limerick; Short (Duh!): Humor; Dedicated To Valsa George; Personal]

Rating: 4.3


This limerick shall have clean wit,
even if I have to clean.....it with spit.
But now comes the hard part:
making it true to my heart.
I don't think it's possible......, so I'll quit!

Tuesday, September 29, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: humor,limerick
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 02 October 2015

I saw this dedication only now! Thanks for this honor! Yes, I really enjoyed your 'clean wit' except for the 'spit '! Yes, you are becoming straight and I feel i am slowly succeeding in my 'uphill task'!

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Lyn Paul 02 October 2015

If we keep trying Bri we will get you on the straight and narrow. Great you are trying for Valsa.

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Kim Barney 29 September 2015

Yes, Bri, this website has many problems. I have more than once considered moving all my poems to another site. Mandolyn has done that, by the way. I enjoyed the limerick. It was fun.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 September 2015

Very amazing and wise limerick shared that makes heart very true. Very interesting quitting later we realize here. Very, very wise poem....10

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Bri Edwards 29 September 2015

i forgot to add a poet's note before submitting and NOW PH won't let me, saying 'you are trying to submit a poem which already exists'. of course it exists! ! ! ! ! dummies! ;) bri professor Valsa has tried to keep me on the straight and narrow, but she is fighting an uphill battle! :) :) thanks, anyways, Valsa, baby.

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