Treasure Island

Dog goD 8Hate

(Grass Valley, Ca.)

Clear Water Here!


Enticing forms numerous, even to me,
daily send bait of bane for suckers -
the sea of fickle fools.
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  • Goldy Locks (1/29/2008 10:40:00 PM)

    I like your spirit. Hell, i like your whole attitude. Smart writer. This has biblical significance, correct - a parallel to the parable where God feeds the masses: fish & bread.

    Will continue reading you. You have me hooked ;) Susan xx (Report) Reply

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