Clock Stopped Poem by Susan Lacovara

Clock Stopped

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Where there is little left breath
An elephant's paw pressing your chest
Deflating the ballooned hope
That yours will be returned
Intact and safely back
The ticking clock stopped
Moments to millennium
Dash of drifting thoughts
Like seconds stilled
In a time capsule of what ifs
Like diving beneath the broken surface
Lungs filled, so as soon again to float
In brightest blue, waters true
But the hands of the clock
Remain at just that point
Where life was put on hold
All the world watching
For a new day to begin
And for the sorrowful stopwatch
To be rewound
Yours to be found
That the fading tic-toc
Counting out the endless hours
Does not deafen your ears
To our prayers

Tuesday, March 18, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: prayer
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
(03/18/14) The world still watches the skies, and hears your cries....The search continues for hopes they are in God's hand. PEACE
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sallam Yassin 26 March 2014

there is a moment in time of life that makes cruel changes in minds and hearts and keeps seized us in depth of her grief afterward and than this really one of that scale! and amen to your prays so genuine piece of soul

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 18 March 2014

Clock stops but time does not. Feelings for the missing are expressed with great depth. We still hope for the best. Thank you.

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