Close Enough To Miss Poem by Scorpio Virgo

Close Enough To Miss

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A natural flow she comes by;
Beautifully adorned, nothing new but far from ordinary.
Oh, to burst the chains of time,
to move close, drawing in every part.
To taste her breath, sweet and wet.
Close enough to miss.

Responsibility interrupts,
walls of expectations divide.
Reality is formidable;
There is hope in a glance;
Yet discretion must rule.
Close enough to miss.

The ox carries us through the day.
Unconsciously, I deliberately wander through the fields;
Rewarded by her gorgeous smile and gleaming eyes.
Magnetic, penetrating, subduing,
I am slain and filled with life.
She's close enough to miss.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ronn Michael Salinas 25 January 2010

do it afar, I guess.

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Terence George Craddock 25 January 2010

to burst the chains of time yes it seems to haunt many artists, a concept addressed in many artistic works. read Song Of My Love for one of my answers I enjoyed your lines so much reminds me of poems I wrote in a rural setting thank you: -)

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Terence George Craddock 25 January 2010

to burst the chains of time yes it seems to haunt many artists, a concept addressed in many artistic works. read Song Of My Love for one of my answers I enjoyed your lines so much reminds me of poems I wrote in a rural setting thank you: -)

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