Kranthi Pothineni


Closed Path - Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

Path of my voyage
Closed in front of eyes
By waving a farewell
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Comments about Closed Path by Kranthi Pothineni

  • (1/3/2010 2:55:00 PM)


    A poem of hope. There is always hope, so never give up. (Report) Reply

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  • (1/3/2010 2:54:00 PM)


    A poem of hope. There is always hope, so never give up. (Report) Reply

  • (7/2/2009 1:19:00 PM)


    You have described Life well in a few sentences. Things change; You never how things can change, change for the better only if look for it. Well published. (Report) Reply

  • (6/26/2009 11:56:00 PM)


    a very good attitude in this poem...go forth for the beauty (Report) Reply

  • (6/22/2009 3:20:00 PM)


    hello friend! ! !

    '
    When my old tracks
    Had gone with wind
    New land had opened
    For me to wonder
    In its hidden rich beauty '

    so glad to hear you talking like this friend! ! ! ! ! .....nice poem indeed! ! ! ! ...
    i wish i can think like this..i m all negative and pessimistic! ! 10++
    well deserved..

    with love
    shan
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  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir (6/22/2009 3:16:00 AM)


    Closed paths are apparent though in static situations of life
    with one finding him or herself directionless. Yet the trance
    is what that can make the otherwise aimless life of a human
    being to glow if one follows the circle of pragmatism.

    Best Wishes
    Naseer
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  • (6/22/2009 12:52:00 AM)


    very good decesion.knock the door, it will open. nice poem.keep it up port. voted10
    surya
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  • Louis Rams (6/21/2009 8:06:00 PM)


    doors open when we're down and out, thats what love is all about. (Report) Reply

  • (6/21/2009 11:52:00 AM)


    When one path is close other path is opened......a good write....... (Report) Reply

  • (6/20/2009 8:38:00 PM)


    Complex
    good flow
    Well crafted
    Kranthi
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  • (6/20/2009 8:38:00 PM)


    Complex
    good flow
    Well crafted
    Kranthi
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  • (6/20/2009 9:55:00 AM)


    Nice poem - we all grow and learn in life. It is to become perfect and find harmony with GOD. (Report) Reply

  • (6/20/2009 9:22:00 AM)


    I like this:
    ''In cover of its obscurity
    I cried on limited power
    Inside my silent shelter
    Which time laid for me
    To discover my new lay''
    have a profound sensitivity, Kranthi, ..well written..10+
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  • Ashraful Musaddeq (6/20/2009 9:19:00 AM)


    'When my old tracks
    Had gone with wind
    New land had opened
    For me to wonder
    In its hidden rich beauty'

    Excellent poem. End is the new starting point.
    New land of hidden beauty.10+++
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  • (6/20/2009 2:46:00 AM)


    yu have made an impact in this poem by using metaphors......closed path really opened a new path to walk...... well penned see my 10 ++ (Report) Reply

  • (6/19/2009 11:25:00 PM)


    So my old words died
    On tip of my tongue
    And new melodies came
    From deep inside heart
    I sang my new lays
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    Wow great metaphors used...melodious piece...as when someone closes the door, the windows will be opened for you...10++++++
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  • (6/19/2009 11:18:00 PM)


    wow boy you got a great poetic flare Loved it!

    that was my sis,

    this is me, I love it! ! ! it is amazing, it's really good! !
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