Closure Poem by David Wood

Closure

Rating: 4.8


The gates now firmly closed and bolted shut
With a rusty padlock and chain. The windows waiting
To be boarded up shutting the world out forever.
Faceless voices cry from wheelchairs and walking sticks,
Placards waived in the frigid air. A solitary seagull sits on
The roof mockingly. Inside gears and spokes from wheels
Will gradually begin to rust with the unfinished widgets
Lying in a deathless sleep where no man will visit them.
The cold wet spring day slowly grinds towards lunch time
Though the hunger for work never diminishes from the
Crowd gathered to oppose the closure.
The council employee with his police escort who locked
The gates for the last time slowly walks away head bend low.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The UK government's closure of the Remploy factories forcing many disabled workers into unemployment and poverty.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tirupathi Chandrupatla 19 June 2013

Though the hunger for work never diminishes Closing a factory is a great blow for the worker. Please read my poem 'Business Closed' which also brings out a similar theme. Thank you.

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Kevin Halls 19 June 2013

So sad but true reflection of the times we are living in with closures everywhere. There's a Remploy here in Coventry and has been for many years. Factories, Shops, Pubs, all closing down!

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Paul Brookes 19 June 2013

Sad day when we hurt those who have the least voice and the most need. I see we still spend millions on our nuclear deterrent. Good write BB: O)

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Heather Wilkins 19 June 2013

this is a very sad event, but it happens world wide. So is it n my country. good write

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Farah Ilyas 19 June 2013

Too poignant poem with the intensity of emotion & sympathy, , too bad, it happens everywhere...good composition

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Amitava Sur 20 November 2013

A very sad event but still it happens breaking the hurts and dreams of so many. Emotive write with a lovely description.

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Cambridge Keenan 12 July 2013

A great poem David, you really get down with the dirty, I like your thoughts

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Ramesh Rai 21 June 2013

a vivid write on present scenario on macine age

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 20 June 2013

movement on poem is fantastic and you lifted too man and machine nice one

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Valsa George 19 June 2013

A very moving picture of factories and places of work being closed down and thousands of employees mercilessly thrown to the streets! Like the machinery getting rusted, people also become atrophied! A powerful write! !

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